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My life in verse

Kaman/ February 18, 2010

Filed under: Vertigo Poems — K. Eltinaé @ 1:29 am

for I.A


You lost your back to laughter,

Empowered the crowd with your fall,

Had you made nothing of it all,

They would have passed dense as clouds,

That find their way again.

But you carried the blame like a turtle,

Making shelter of your guilt,

Assez this, Assez that

Obsessed with that lizard in your hat.

Lay out your palms and sigh

Speak only of what weighs on your mind,

Without pauses pre-designed.

There is algae in the water, of the statue

Where you stand,

Some argue it is negligence,

Others claim that it was planned,

It matters not the route , the doubts

You followed then,

How is your today?

Still walk around anxious, a purse heavy with rope

Just incase you drown or slip somewhere

Like in your horoscope?

I know you’ve let some people down,

You lived with that affliction,

Reaching for pendants across your chest,

Believing others know what’s best,

Where is your tongue vacationing?

Your eyelids thumbed shut; a garage door,

Your ambitions filthy ragged , a mess of a mop

That has fought hard against a stubborn floor.

Your spirit passes through chimes, your bones

I visit too, listening for cries

A cricket, a violin , a siren, at most

Yet always in disguise.

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5 Responses to “Kaman/”

  1. How do you do it? It would be amazing enough to come up with one poem like this in a lifetime, but you seem to come up with one every week! This is beautiful, as always! The final few lines are stunning. Thank you for sharing.

  2. Enas Says:

    Qahlid, whenever I’m scattered and lost, your brilliant poetry puts the pieces of my puzzle back together. Thank you for taking writing seriously and sharing it with us

  3. Ahmed Diab Says:

    Boogie
    U know I don’t understand poetry as well as u do but it’s very amazing one :) and I really like
    Miss u bro

  4. noojy Says:

    “but you carried the blame like a turtle, making shelter of your guilt”….!!
    what a metaphor…
    impressing..

  5. Ibz Says:

    You are indeed a work of art.

    Jupiter

    Your funky hat is made out of frozen streams,

    Your dreams beget methods and utensils,… See More

    Too foreign for the mundane mind to bear.

    You insist you are worldly, I insist

    You are from Jupiter.

    You fly against the wind and dream

    Against brainwaves to beget mountains of streams.

    You drive in the opposite direction and fight against

    Lofty affection and dressy potential.

    Your ink is precious and your words are mightier.

    Flamingos hit you in the core of your being,

    But your infatuation with graciousness ornaments

    The peripheries of your art.

    Your hidden spirituality decorates your vision.

    You sing the songs of the last century but

    You learn from the parables of today.

    Your time machine is set in the galaxy.

    You insist that you are mundane,

    But I insist you come from Jupiter.


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