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My life in verse

Sardines/ October 5, 2010

Filed under: Vertigo Poems — K. Eltinaé @ 9:25 am

A door reveals four identical bodies,

Stinking of fear and hate for one another.

The first is a coward, guarding herself with placenta,

Stubborn as baby who is convinced she is invisible.

She goes kicking and screaming,

Collapsing on lips, the ground

Her blanket useless, an apology.

The second has a sense of humor,

He makes jokes and watches for reactions,

Laughing at his own absurdity,

Making more room for himself.

He is tickled by death, or perhaps it is gravity,

A satisfied tourist, departing with smiles.

The third plays back memories of the sea,

Committing to a different espace,  reality

Paralyzed by order and fate,

She arrives in the after-life, regal, a queen

Her worldly attachments dignified,

The richest in flavour.

The last inhales waiting, an angry balloon

He is fooled by interruptions, excited for his life

Luck he discovers cannot save him,

From the kitchen flies who punish and expose his pretenses.

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2 Responses to “Sardines/”

  1. Asmara Says:

    very relatable..and really sad actually :(

  2. jeanne Says:

    I’ve been away too long from your poetry.
    As always, your imagery fascinates and embraces tightly each emotion. I feel drenched in “blood, sweat and tears” when I read your words … I feel buttered with humanity.

    Yes, very sad.


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